this is some great stuff! definitely needs to be upvoted which is just what i did
I really appreciate you liked this. :) You have made my day.
pretty good stuff. id throw that leady through a delay and reverb maybe turn down a lil cuz its over powering. like the rythm section and the bass line with it @ 20 secs
Thanks for leaving these reviews! :) But first I have some older projects to finish :)
this is more trance....just sayin
going through the audio portal and unfortanately this 30 sec wip is the best thing iv come across lololololololololololol
i 5'd a bunch of your stuff. i think you have a lot of potential. a little more time and you could make some really good stuff. one thing i would suggest is tryin to making melodies with a lead synth. a lot of your dub only has base lines. i think if you added more leads they could definitely be better. keep it up dude you could definitely become somethin big
Thanks man I appreciate it, I've since learned a lot about music production since I've made this, thanks for the review.
dont take my rating into consideration cuz im not a fan of the psycadelic gengre. i will say the drum line in this is good tho. my only suggestion to these kind of tracks is more low end or bass.(i dunno if i just cant hear it with my head phones but i got pretty good ones). i ususally use a sin wave to make things more fuller. just stoppin by, dont take my rating to hard im just not into this kind of music. i rated it at the top for 5 tho for checkin my stuff out. see ya round
Thanks for the review, I try mixing as many different elements as I can in my music.
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your kick needs to be mastered throw it through a compressor(multiband compressor mess with some settings if fl studio), your high hat @ :17 needs to be a lil reverbed and delayed for a more proffesional filled out sound same with the 16th note high hat. the snare too could use a smidge of delay/reverb. the sounds are a lil dry. we talked about at work. everything needs a lil reverb cuz you like using these sounds in a program but in real life there is reverb everwhere. i like the progression very chill and simple. id just say the percussion needs some tweeking to fill out some space with the reverb. id throw a really reverbed crash at 1:01 to kinda give the mellow part a stronger fill. @2:17 the synth kind of comes out of nowhere so could use a lil better build up and personally i found it annoying. to high and the melody/flow needs a lil work. all in all this track is solid just could use some tweaks to sound cooler
Thanks for the tips :)
good ideas but again need to work on your mastering
If you could, it would be appreciated if you could PM me some tips on doing that, I'm always willing to learn more, especially since I have no idea what I'm going with DnB
everythings good on this tracck but you need to compress your kick cuz its distorted... unless thats the sound you are going for but i think this track would sound better without the distortion
Yea that kick has an issue with that. I'm still working on a way to make it stop doing that without hollowing out the melody.
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